Initial breakdown of scenes that could be included in the piece with the tone and example dialogue added to help start writing dialogue for Dawn.
The first attempt at dialogue for Dawn by Steph.
The first attempt at dialogue for Dawn by Catherine.
A blend of Staph and Catherine’s script plus some more dialogue added by Catherine.
More dialogue added and alternative endings created by Catherine, ready to be created into a formatted script.
The finalised script created into the correct format by Georgie.
The final formatted script with a few dialogue changes and scene numbers added in.
Directors annotated script for recording
The director Catherine made notes throughout the script on the day before the recording to help her direct the actors. On the day of the recordings she spent a few hours before going through the scripts with the actors explaining how she would like each scene to be played.
Gillene Herbert’s (Dawn) annotated script
Gillene made notes from her talks with the Director Catherine to help her remember how each scene should be played.
Annotated script for editing
To start editing we had to choose which take from recording we liked best, sometimes this would be a blend of two takes. We then put the piece together in order. We then listened through to pick out any changes and additional sounds we needed. This process was repeated several times.
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